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LJ doesn't love me, and I'm extremely bored at work.

Hi? :D :D?

Yay! :D :D I can probably be home by that time, but I kind of want to do more editing? I feel like I'm in edit/write mode and should probably try to utilize that. :D?

Exactly! :D :D

I AM SO EXCITED FOR ALL THE THINGS WHAT NEED TO BE WRITTEN.

So exciting!!! I definitely can't stand in the way of that :) :) :)

I think I am going to head home now so I too can get more editing done! What is this work of which you speak?

Me too me too! That master timeline really does need to be written--sometime in the future. :)

If we do author notes, I want you to know that my author note for this story might be:

slkrchck: why can't I write medium sized fic like a normal person?
esrafil: because! feelings! things!

hahahaha

I am good with this author note. :)

especially because I keep making suggestions that result in more writing.

yes, yes you do.

but then again, so do i, so i can't blame it all on you :)

so here's where i get thinky again: i think at the end of the day, what it comes down to is that you always want to show rather than tell, and that often means adding more, rather than taking some out. i mean, i'm open to going through it at the end with the intention of shortening it, but i think everything we've added makes it stronger in some way. so i'm not terribly worried :)

these are both very good points. :)

and I completely agree on showing rather than telling. ALL OF THE WORDS.

ALL OF THEM.

i mean, are you delighted to go and reread ALL THE WORDS when it's done? because i am. so as long as we're delighted, i think it's okay :)

also, it's charles. if a story about him weren't hugely long, how would you know that you had the right charles f. xavier?

I ASK YOU THAT.

hahaha I'm not sure the Charles story I'm writing will be as long as this first story? :D? but I hope it still seems like him? :D?

but what do you mean, you don't just vomit words out onto a page and hope it turns out for the best? i do not understand!

(from what you've sent me thus far, it seems very much like him. i am super excited for it! yay!)

sometimes yes, sometimes no? :D? :D?

(i'm glad you do! because i have really strong opinions about him as you may have noticed...)

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