but then again, so do i, so i can't blame it all on you :)
so here's where i get thinky again: i think at the end of the day, what it comes down to is that you always want to show rather than tell, and that often means adding more, rather than taking some out. i mean, i'm open to going through it at the end with the intention of shortening it, but i think everything we've added makes it stronger in some way. so i'm not terribly worried :)
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but then again, so do i, so i can't blame it all on you :)
so here's where i get thinky again: i think at the end of the day, what it comes down to is that you always want to show rather than tell, and that often means adding more, rather than taking some out. i mean, i'm open to going through it at the end with the intention of shortening it, but i think everything we've added makes it stronger in some way. so i'm not terribly worried :)
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and I completely agree on showing rather than telling. ALL OF THE WORDS.
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i mean, are you delighted to go and reread ALL THE WORDS when it's done? because i am. so as long as we're delighted, i think it's okay :)
also, it's charles. if a story about him weren't hugely long, how would you know that you had the right charles f. xavier?
I ASK YOU THAT.
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(from what you've sent me thus far, it seems very much like him. i am super excited for it! yay!)
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(i'm glad you do! because i have really strong opinions about him as you may have noticed...)