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[ionic]

Update for raquia again. This time with the themes: death, weakness, tears, sickness, melody, confusion, fear, lightning, bonds, completion, sun.

Read here. The flow isn't intentional, but it seems to be there.

Comments

[tamensei.livejournal.com]

((ne, e, you misspelled the word 'soul' in Death #13. Unless you meant the fish, which.. gives off twisted imagery. XDDD Otherwise, i love the sentences. XP))

~kuu

[chiasmus.livejournal.com]

XD I meant it in the solitary sense, but then I realized I left out a 'was', so thanks for pointing that out! *hug*

[tamensei.livejournal.com]

XDD I'm grammar greak, no, no problema. XP

Though i do make sentence mistakes all the time. >_>